Let me start off by saying, I really like this image. I love the idea of it and the emotion behind it. I like the feel and the tension in the composition between these two characters. The whole thing makes me smile, and want to dream up stories for these two.
However, there is one major detail that really jar's me out of this picture and makes me imagine dreadful endings. With the rope that's anchoring the male character to the ship hooked over the same shoulder as the hand that's holding the rope... realistically the rope isn't going to stay on that shoulder not with his body turning outwards and his shoulder dropping down as he reaches out with the other to give the girl the rose. If he isn't going to tumbling off into space the rope would need to cross the body and go over the other shoulder.
Similarly the ships light hanging beneath his feet has a sharp tilt or movement to it. However her hair appears static. The ships light might be moving because of the wind or the ship's movement. If the wind is that strong it would affect other areas of the image. If it's the ship’s movement then it would make his perch even more precarious because the wind is pushing him out of the rope.
Yes, these are fairly small details; however, I've found that it's the details that often get me the most. I can overlook the ships light moving and write it off as ship movement. I really do love the idea and the vision of this image. Keep it up.
Comme d'habitude, très bien agencé, une ambiance et un univers bien posés : on est tout de suite plongés dans l'ambiance de la scène ! A ça, j'ajouterai le travail de la lumière et la petite impression d'éblouissement au niveau de l'homme, qui donne effectivement cette impression de réalisme, qu'il n'est pas collé comme ça sur un décors mais qu'il est devant un Soleil bien réel.
Les deux personnages ont l'air faits pour cette scène et être présentés ensemble, ce choix également est tout à fait pertinent ! L'appui de l'homme sur une des cordes de son "bateau-avion" est aussi un petit détail qui ajoute du réalisme et de l'équilibre à la scène.
En somme, un travail magnifique à petite comme à grande échelle Félicitation pour la DD bien méritée !
This is really great. I am having a Steampunk contest at my group and would like to know if you would like to enter this. We do accept older work. **** If you do submit it into the contest, would you please add into your description that you are entering the contest and link to the groups page.